Expert Personal Statement Writing & Editing: Elevate Your Application to Excellence
Enhance your application with our top-tier personal statement service. Our skilled writers expertly craft your story, emphasizing your academic and professional achievements. Choose us for a compelling, concise narrative that boosts your admission prospects.
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Personal Statement Services
We help you produce a clear, credible personal statement (or application essay) that fits your prompt, matches your target program, and presents your strengths in a way admissions readers can quickly understand.
1) Editing and writing support
For applicants who need strong structure, clean execution, and a professional final piece.
- Common Application essays (primary and school-specific)
- Supplemental application essays
- “Why this school?” and other recurring prompts
2) Revisions and clarity
For applicants who have a draft and want it tightened, corrected, and made easier to read.
- Flow and structure revisions
- Content suggestions and targeted feedback
- Proofreading for spelling, grammar, and clarity
3) Personal statement positioning
For applicants who need a stronger “through-line” and a clearer reason for fit.
- Graduate personal statements and program-specific narratives
- Statement of Purpose (SOP) alignment with the prompt
- UC personal statements and broader “fit” storytelling
Personal Statement Editing Process
We build your essay from verified details, then shape it to fit your prompt and your target schools. The goal is a focused statement that reads cleanly and feels credible.
Send your materials
Your existing essays (if any), transcript, test scores, and a list of target schools.
Motivation and direction
We ask questions about why you are pursuing this field and what you want admissions to understand about you.
Evidence and stories
We gather details about your history, accomplishments, and turning points, then decide what belongs in the essay.
Edit and proofread
We draft or refine your personal statement to present your strengths, experience, and preparation for the field.
Review and revise
We revise the essay and finalize it so it is ready to submit to your target school(s).
Want us to review your prompt and recommend the best path for your draft?
Contact Our Consultants| Price for Editing Personal Statements and Application Essays | |
| Initial Phone Consultation (15 minutes) | Free |
| Personal Statement / Application Essays (all essays for one school totaling fewer than 900 words)* | First School $985 Subsequent Schools* $442.50 |
| Long Essay (all essays for one school totaling 900-1500 words)* | First School $1,485 Subsequent Schools* $742.50 |
| Waitlist Appeal Letter / Letter of Continued Interest | $985 |
Personal Statement Editing Service
The reputation of our personal statement service in the college and graduate school application field is unmatched by any other company. The personal statement writers at SOS Admissions have helped over 17,000 happy clients and counting to create outstanding and unique personal statements, application essays, and statements of purpose.
Our Application Essay Writers consider your success our success, and for this reason, we make use of every resource we have to ensure your personal statement is outstanding. Consultations can be done anywhere in the world via Zoom, Skype, Google Chat, or FaceTime, or you can come into our Beverly Hills office.
Our Application Essay Writers consider your success our success, and for this reason, we make use of every resource we have to ensure your personal statement is outstanding. Consultations can be done anywhere in the world via Zoom, Skype, Google Chat, or FaceTime or you can come into our Beverly Hills office.
Call us at 310-951-4008 or click “Start now” to complete the form and have our personal statement writers call you about your personal statement.